Tuesday, 3 September 2019

dancing

we are doing a dance called strip the willow it is a scottish dance  it is like a chain you go round and round it is very cool and fun we are doing it for our dress up night.

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  2. Hi Tyrone I think you should add more punchation and detail it's quite short to.

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  3. you are very right it is very cool

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  4. Hi Tyrone, cool post you got there. Very informational. The dance isn't called strip the willow, it's the folk dance. The song is strip the willow.

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  5. Hi Tyrone, I think you should add more detail and add more about the dance so people understand if they want to try it.

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  6. Hello I liked how you explained but as some other people said it's quite short and there is only 2 sentences. But maybe you extend it by explaining other things you do in the dance and the song.

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  7. hi Tyrone great blog but could you add more sentences and detail. what if a kid who had no idea about this and came onto your blog he wouldn't learn that much

    sincerely

    Jackson

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  8. Hi Tyrone, Maybe add more info, because if I didn't know what strip the willow is I couldn't tell add more info next time. Start with a capital letter! Good job

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