Monday, 2 September 2019

holes

This is spiced peaches it is from  the  book holes  stanley yelnats  and zero found it 100 years later zero called it sploosh and five minutes after zero had a tummy ache and he fell on the ground.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyrone, I think you could involve a bit more information about the spiced peaches and more about it otherwise it was really good

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