Friday, 25 October 2019

camping

Today I am going camping. After twilight soccer.

It is past palmerston

I have a new tent it is green with a black floor it can fit 8 people in it there are three rooms.

Me ,Aroha ,Isaac, Raymond,Natalia my family is coming /The people who I usey go with.

I am looking ford to playing spotlight with my cousins  Taipari ,Te ahi mason/spotlight is a game that you play at night first a person is in they count to any number with a torch then they come and find you the last person to get found is in for the next round. we have new torches.

I can't wait to go camping.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Tyrone Palmerston needs a capital letter because its a town other than that it looks good, it also sounds fun - by Lilley

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  2. hey Ty. This blog is quite good. This also reminds me of when I was little i loved camping on the farm we used to own. Just wondering what twilight soccer is. When you said what people are coming, it doesn't make sense. You also need a fullstop when you said it was in Palmeston. All in all good blog. It sounds like you had lots of fun.

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